[ ] Is it readable on a phone?
(Send a test email to yourself).
[ ] Is the "Problem" specific and quantifiable?
Bad: "Marketing."
Good: "Attribution errors in Google Ads that leads to 3% loss in leads lost."
[ ] Is your Solution supported by any metrics and/or hard facts?
Bad: "We increase conversion ratesā
Good: "We improve deliverability of emails by an average of 20% for the business of your sizeā
[ ] Do you briefly touch on the secret sauce to make you look solid?
Bad: "We improve delivarabilityā
Good: "We improve delivarability through smart rerouting of DMARCā
[ ] Is the CTA "Low Friction", i.e. doesn't ask for anything big lime a meeting upfront?
Bad: "Can I have 30 mins to demo?"
Good: "Do you have this problem?"